I'm impressed at how much the intro page for the game here can say without ever telling you what the game is actually about.

The ONLY thing selling me on this game and making me curious enough to bother to download it is the artwork --specifically the design of the potential LI's.

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....y'know what. I'm kinda glad I did bother.
This game is pretty funny. lol

I adore Valentine. 😂

...the mc's kinda an idiot tho.
But I have a feeling that's the point.

I have a few things I kinda wanna pick on, but then I realize/remember that this is the crackfic version of a game, and go "Eeh. It's a crackfic game. It's probably intentionally stupid for comedy value."

So ultimately it won't necessarily be better if you improve it. And it might make it worse.
Comedy is tricky that way.
And it's funny the way it is now.

Alright, so this game is ridiculously funny, weirdly compelling, and just....ridiculous. 😂

The only real problem is that it's so short that it feels like it's missing a big chunk of story (between meeting someone the second time and 
being invited to the ball.)

So I am keeping my fingers crossed that this is a work in progress, and that the weird gaps will eventually be filled in with many more meetings.

(I'd love to see you help Val kick out the demon he summoned (or the demon get the rights to Val's room if you romance the demon), and maybe see some of the actual magic classes and such.

And I will LAUGH if the potion master have shoulder-long, black, greasy hair and is named 'Snipe', and he breaks the fourth wall by insisting it is not a rip-off of anything. ....and the potion he keeps failing to make is a shampoo of some kind.... xD)

Anyway....

This game is ridiculously cute and funny.
(And just...ridiculous.)

It deserves a better presentation.

That said, I also hope you update it with more fun scenes to play. ^_^

AAAAAAA, druga gra otome jaką widzę, żeby była zrobiona przez kogoś z Polski, widzę piękniusie twarze, więc zabieram się za granie :3